poetry

Modular

Modular home – not for me
Standardized rooms feel empty
Hobbit house fills me with glee
Better yet – home in a tree

This 3-story treehouse is somewhere near Revelstoke, British Columbia.


This is my second attempt at a Tanaga which is  a traditional Filipino poetic form, similar in its brevity and depth to the Japanese haiku. It often uses rich metaphor, or talinghaga, to offer wisdom, advice, or vivid imagery. There is absolutely no wisdom or advice in my Tanaga — just a cool treehouse.

The rules for a tanaga are:

  • Write exactly four lines.
  • Use seven syllables in each line.
  • Follow an AAAA rhyme scheme. Modern variations such as ABAB or AABB are also welcome.
  • Traditionally, tanagas are untitled, allowing the poem to speak for itself.

This is also my response to the RDP prompt: Modular

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