Look. Take a snapshot and frame a moment:
[The deer too near the road frozen in fear]
[Tourist on black tarmac, the bestowment
Of a lei, Hawaii’s first souvenir]
A magnifying glass serves as a frame
That convex lens enlarging [blades of grass]
If dry, the grass might swiftly burst in [flame]
[The magnifier aims sun rays en masse]
I can make [a frame with fingers and thumbs]
And raise them high, see [bits of sky and cloud]
[Wispy white] turns [thunder gray] as [storm comes]
See [lightning flash], hear thunder crash too loud
The best of poems (I think you’ll agree)
Capture something intangible and small
A dumb thing overlooked you wouldn’t see
Unless there was a frame that brooked it all
Be mindful. Stop whatever else you’re doing and notice. Allow yourself to be seized by this…
~~ Frederick Buechner, The Remarkable Ordinary
This is my response to this week’s W3 Challenge. The Poet of the Week instructed us to write a poem that utilises internal rhyme where possible and keep the length between 8 and 16 lines.
Sally, this is a delight!! Bravo!
I love the frames within frames. Sometimes we capture what we didn’t know we had seen. (K)
Great poem and wonderful quote too. 👏
Sally what a fun and thoughtful poem, with a unified metaphor and vivid sensory detail🙌
A wonderful write!
Sally, that “frame with fingers and thumbs” moment feels so real to me — you make the small things suddenly visible. Lovely work 💛
~David
hi, Sally❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Dennis, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2025/11/19/w3-prompt-186-weave-written-weekly/
Much love,
David