poetry

Editing

Remeber
[back-back-back] mber
When we used white out
[back-back-back-back] -out
Or the coree
[back-back] rective tape on the typewti
[back-back] riter to fix all the typose
[back] ?

Yeah, well
I’ll bet kids these t
[back] days have no idea of what we went through
Just o
[back] to repair silly mistakes —
Those fat-fingered ones we all make

Now control-Z is my best friend
As well as that back space key

I have yet to figure out how kids type with their thumbs, though.
[back-back-back-back-back-back-back-back-back-back-back-back-back-back-back-back-back-back-back-back-back-back-back-back-back-back-back-back] on their phoe
[back] nes with their thumbs, though –
And with higher accuracy ta
[back] than I have even though I took a keyboarding class.

Crazy, yes?


This is my response to the W3 prompt this week. Poet-of-the-week Suzanne Brace asked us to: “Compose a poem that conveys ‘Movement’, using repetition to move your ideas and imagery forward.”

However, I didn’t move forward. Pretty sure I was doing a lot of moving backward.

16 thoughts on “Editing

  1. This is awesome…and I definitely wear out the back space key! I also find myself typing faster as a rule, since mistakes are much easier to correct.

    1. Exactly! I don’t think the next generation can fathom what it was like. Remember corrasable bond typing paper that could be erased? Good times, right?

  2. You did a great job with the prompt and it was very cleverly written. I hated all of those correction tapes/white outs/etc. I even remember having to make carbon copies of documents when I first went to work back in the late 70’s.

  3. Oh yes I remember this too! Such a clever poem Sally, I think since we have the keyboard I make far more mistakes just keep back-back-back 😂 I feel I type faster now but I think I was far more accurate when I knew it would be hard to correct! Great take on this

    💞Suzanne

    1. I had to look up Tippex. It’s what Americans called White-Out — correction fluid. I was the White-Out queen 😬 😜😂

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