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Erasure Poems

Sally

The W3 challenge is: let’s write erasure poems.

“Erasure poetry, also known as blackout poetry, is a form of found poetry wherein a poet takes an existing text and erases, blacks out, or otherwise obscures a large portion of the text, creating a wholly new work from what remains.

“You might begin with an existing text or poem and shape something new by removing words, or write your own piece and then erase portions of it to reveal another layer. You could even place a poem over a work of art and present it visually as an erasure.”

When my oldest brother passed away, I found a couple of books where he had been doing this — blacking out whole pages and only leaving one or two words. It was fascinating. But, then, my oldest brother was literally a genius.

I don’t know what the heck I’m doing with this. Clearly.

I muddled through books yesterday and today trying to come up with something.

Here’s one:

Al
e
x
pre
tti
fought bravely
Can you see him?
Who is he?

Then I put in this (less than) valiant effort:

I do not know
I do not know
Do you know?
No, said the farmer’s wife

Do you know?
Why yes, I know

I know
Do you know?
I am going away
all alone
Good-by!

What does it all mean? I’m with the farmer’s wife. I do not know.

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