
“Is that my shirt?” Deena asked.
“What are you talking about?” her sister Sadie replied. “I bought this shirt a year ago.”
Deena shook her head. “No, in the photo.”
“What?! That’s a soap dispenser!” Sadie said. “I balanced it on the post and liked the shadows it made, so I snapped a photo of it.”
“Well, that’s my shirt,” Deena said, pointing to a faint bit of plaid visible through the doorway.
“Oh, yeah, oops,” Sadie said sheepishly. “I suppose you want it back?”
“Nah, you can have it.”
“Come here, Deena, and tell me what you see,” Sadie said, looking out the front window.
“I see Mrs. Smith weeding her flowers,” she answered, pointing off to the side. “Why?”
“Because I see your bike left on the lawn,” said Sadie.
“How about here?” she asked, pulling Deena into the kitchen.
“I see a sink full of dishes,” Deena said.
“And I see the fruit bowl on the counter!”
They both laughed and ran into the living room.
“Guess what I see here,” Deena asked.
Sadie looked off to the side, and saw the unfolded blanket on a chair. She pointed at it and Deena nodded.
“But what do I see?” Sadie asked.
Deena furrowed her brow and studied the center of the room. “The pile of books?”
“Yes!” Sadie squealed.
“Guess what I see,” said a stern voice behind them.
The girls turned.
“I see two girls with Saturday chores to do,” said their mother. “Start cleaning.”
This is my response to this week’s Unicorn Challenge:
Using the photo prompt, write a story of 250 words or less.
Then go clean your room.
I love this!
A lovely snippet of home life.
Great take on the prompt, Sally.
And the whole question of what different people see neatly rounded off by what their mother sees.
(I hadn’t noticed the plaid through the doorway!)
Fun take on the prompt. My eagle-eyed wife spotted the material after I’d posted my story. π
I think that is a very true to life story!!
This made me laugh twice over, Sally.
First because of the humour in the truth of your story, and secondly because I took the bliddy photo and didn’t see the wretched shirt (mine!) in the doorway!
Thanks for that!
This made me smile. And you have a sharp eye (I missed the shirt!) And an even sharper imagination! πππ
I love the insight into how different people see things! Cute story, Sally!