poetry

Ring around the Rosie

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Sorting through lives
Letters and photos
Trinkets and baubles
What once was important
Is no more
The poignant priorities
Tyrannies of the urgent
Become nothing but ashes

Ashes, ashes
We all fall down
While holding hands
Clinging, connecting
Laughing, crying
And supporting one another

The W3 prompt this week is write a quadrille—a 44-word poem with no required rhyme or meter — on “what remains.”

Poet of the week Sheila Bair has been caring for her mother with dementia, which is, indeed, the fading away of a person. I watched my own mother disappear that way.

This week my sister is helping me sort through the stuff that remains in the house. So many letters and papers and objects that hold memories are here. We hold them in our hands; we feel the moment for which they existed; then, it’s decision time. Save? Recycle? Gift to someone else that they, too, might hold it for a moment?

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Bird’s Eye View

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“This monitor taps into city cameras and cameras we’ve placed,” he said. “Yes, we have a camera on the roof of this building.”

He moved to the center screen. “This one shows what the gull is ‘seeing.’ It’s looking through its eyes.”

The woman remarked, “Lovely view.”

He smiled. “This last monitor is a city map that shows the gull’s location.”

She nodded.

He gestured at the controls — a joystick, keyboard, mouse, and a stylus and screen. “The gull can be maneuvered using all of these. Flight, direction, speed — all here. There are built in sensors so it won’t fly it into a fixed object like a window or building. If we want a photograph, it will be from gull’s eyes’ perspective. Just tap here.”

“Who actually operates all this?” she asked.

“I do. I’ll warn you, though — it’s pricey,” he said.

“Money is no object,” she replied.

He smiled. “In that case, let’s get started.”

She pulled out a paper. “This is our address,” she said, “and this is where he works. I want to know everywhere else that he goes.”

He studied the paper and nodded.

“Can the gull look into windows?” she asked.

“We’ve had success with first floor windows. The gull can usually perch or walk outside,” he replied.

“That’ll work,” she answered. “I’m especially interested if he goes into stores.”

“You think he’s seeing someone in a store?”

“Seeing someone?!” she scoffed. “I want to know what he’s getting me for my birthday!”

This is my submission for the Unicorn Challenge. The challenge has only two rules: 1) no more than 250 words, and 2) must be inspired by the photo prompt.

I think my bird spy camera could adapt to the locale. A crow would do well in rural America. Or the ubiquitous robin, although they are nowhere near as brazen as a gull or crow. Pigeons might do nicely in most cities. I may be on to something, right?

poetry

Understanding

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This is my response to the W3 Challenge this week, which basically is to write a poem and then feed it into http://www.spoonbill.org/n+7/, a site which “replaces the nouns with another one a bit further on in the dictionary. No AI involved.”

So — I wrote a Triolet in response to the vitriol on the news. There’s a HUGE part of me that wishes people — not politicians — could sit at the same table and listen to each other.

A triolet is a poem of eight lines, rhyming abaaabab and so structured that the first line recurs as the fourth and seventh and the second as the eighth.

My original:

I sit across the table from
One whose thoughts veer far from mine
“Tell me, friend — why so glum?”
I sit across the table from
Someone wounded by the scrum
I listen, hear the counterline
I sit across the table from
One whose thoughts veer far from mine

The Spoonbill version (with a few tweaks to make it fit the poem structure)

I sit across the tangle from
One whose times veer far from mob
“Tell me, future — why so glum?”
I sit across the tangle from
Someone wounded by the scrum
I listen, hear about your job
I sit across the tangle from
One whose times veer far from mob

_______________

New word for me, which I think I love because it so suits the situation:
Counterline: A secondary melody that contrasts with the main melody and is played at the same time.

Listen. Really listen. Can you hear both melodies?

A to Z Blogging Challenge · Life

Q is for Quiet

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Silence is the absence of sound and quiet the stilling of sound. Silence can’t be anything but silent. Quiet chooses to be silent. It holds its breath to listen. It waits and is still.

Frederick Buechner, Whistling in the Dark

The other day I was talking with a friend in the driveway when a flash of blue caught both our eyes. We followed it to the upper branches of a sugar maple.

“It’s not a bluebird,” my friend said.

“No. I know this one,” I told him. “It’s an Indigo Bunting.” I knew this because one had flown into the glass of a window and lay stunned on our deck some years ago. I took this photo to identify it and wrote a less-than-titillating post about it called “Bleh“

Aren’t the blues stunning?

What has this to do with quiet? Well, my favorite time of day has long been early morning. I get up before the sun to sit with a cup of coffee, a book, and a journal. I need the alone time. I need the quiet time.

Of late, I’ve been using Merlin to identify the birds that join me one at a time in my early morning quiet.

The robin is nearly always first — and monopolizes the conversation. I laugh when it’s the first — you know, getting the worm and all. But it’s quickly joined by sparrows and vireos, wrens and woodpeckers.

And indigo buntings.

The other morning, the bunting was outside my window and I snapped this photo:

Years ago, I had held one, stunned, in my hand and later watched it fly away.

Every morning now, I hold my breath in quiet and listen to the birds, remembering the resurrection of one, and marveling at life.

fiction

Art

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“That’s weird,” Johnny said. “I don’t understand it.”

“I’m not sure I do either, but that’s art,” his mother replied.

Johnny scoffed. “Everything about it is wrong,” he said. “The hands are too big. The feet are too big. The head is too small. The body itself is disproportionate.”

“Did you just say ‘disproportionate’?” she asked.

“It’s a big word, Mom. I learned it at school. Do you need me to explain it you?” Johnny replied, looking up at his mother who was fighting back laughter.

“No,” she replied, “I know what it means.”

“I’m right, aren’t I? If he came alive and climbed down from that chair, he would be a scary dude.”

His mother carefully considered the piece. Johnny was right. “I think the sculptor was trying to say something,” she said.

“What?” Johnny asked.

“I honestly don’t know.”

“You know what I think? I think the sculptor did a terrible job. If I was Art, I’d be mad,” Johnny said.

“What are you talking about?” his mother asked.

“You’re the one that recognized the statue guy!” he exclaimed. “You said it was Art!”

His mother started to laugh.

Johnny repeated, “If I was Art, I’d be mad!”

This is my submission for the Unicorn Challenge. The weekly challenge offers a picture to inspire your writing and a limit of 250 words.

I came in at a cool 200 words today.

The Sally Rule for the Unicorn Challenge: When you have no idea about the picture, turn it into a parent-child conversation.

poetry

Without a Hurt

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“Without a hurt, the heart is hollow”
At 17 my heart o’erflowed–
My boyfriend left (I did not follow)
Lost, alone — I carried the load

A load of grief — weak teenage heart!
But without hope, the heart is heavy
What feels so insurmountable then
Is but a tax that life must levy

Levy, impose, charge, collect
The one-two punch when child leaves home
Without a home, the heart is haggard
We need belonging to find shalom

Ah, Shalom, you’re so elusive
Particularly when life is knotty
It is so humbling to sit in failure
Without humility, the heart is haughty

Still and still and still again
Hurt and hope, home, humility
When life brings sorrow to our heart
We can find strength in our fragility

I’m going through boxes of stuff trying to clean house and came across a syrupy, nauseating, teen-angsty poem that I had written when my high school boyfriend broke up with me. In the poem, I quoted a song from The Fantasticks, a play I love: “Without a hurt, the heart is hollow.” I ended the poem, quite melodramatically, with “my heart is not hollow, but full.”

Do you remember how, as a teenager, a break-up felt like you were picking your way through a wasted post-Armaggedon landscape, with absolutely nothing left for you?

And yet, somehow, we survive.

It makes me laugh now.

The W3 Challenge for the Weeks asks a lot. Poet of the Week Bob Lynn gave us these requirements:

a. Required Poetic Device: Repetition/Anaphora

Your poem must include deliberate repetition of a word, phrase, or sentence structure at least three times throughout the piece. This could be:

  • The same word beginning multiple lines or stanzas
  • A repeated phrase that acts as a refrain
  • Parallel sentence structures that create rhythm and emphasis

Example from the inspiration piece: “keep cookin’”, “keep settin’”, “keep talkin’”

b. Required Word: “Still”

Your poem must incorporate the word “still” at least twice. This word can function as:

  • An adverb indicating continuation (“I still remember…”)
  • An adjective describing quietness (“the still morning”)
  • A verb meaning to calm or quiet (“to still the waters”)

This word connects to the poem’s themes of persistence, memory, and the tension between movement and stillness in grief.

Additional Notes

  • Your poem should explore how physical spaces hold emotional significance
  • Consider writing in an authentic voice that feels personal and conversational
  • There are no restrictions on length, form, or rhyme scheme
  • Focus on creating vivid, sensory details that ground your emotions in concrete imagery
fiction

Riding the Bus

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I climbed onto the bus and smiled. We don’t have buses like this where I come from. As a newby traveller, I was determined to make my way places using public transport.

I only spoke English. “Should I learn their language?” I asked my friends from home.

“Nah, everyone speaks English,” more than one person had said.

It turns out that not everyone speaks English, especially in the smaller, more isolated cities.

The bus was mostly empty. I rested my head against the window and closed my eyes listening to the rumble-hum of the bus, the psssssshh of the airbrakes at each stop, and the murmur of words I couldn’t understand.

Suddenly I recognized words whispered in English.

“Your job is to grab the old lady and tie her up,” said a male voice in a gravelly whisper.

“Hush,” replied another male whisperer.

“She’s the only one in earshot,” said the first voice, “and I doubt she speaks English. Besides she’s sleeping.”

As they reviewed their plans to rob a rich woman in her home, I listened in horror.

Quickly I came up with my own plan.

The bus stopped in a crowded market area. The men behind me got off. I followed.

“Excuse me,” I called. They turned, and I snapped a photo of them on my phone.

“I’m scheduling a ‘send’ of this photo to the police. Meet me here tomorrow at this time with my cut and I will cancel the send,” I said, and slipped away.

This is my contribution to the Unicorn Challenge. The rules are easy: 1. Use the photo for inspiration, and 2. No more than 250 words.

Sometimes Most of the time my ideas are bigger than 250 words. That’s the hardest thing. I don’t think I did this idea justice, but I did bring it in at 250 words!

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The Girl Who Shouted No

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There was a little girl,
Who had a little curl,
Right in the middle of her forehead
When she was good,
She was very good indeed,
But when she was bad she was horrid.

~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

She was cute, although
Her favorite word was NO
She shouted it often and loudly
Her mother sat her down
And said, with quite a frown,
“Daughter, you do NOT do me proudly.

“I know this sounds absurd
But could you choose another word
One without such negative implication?
If you can’t do that for me
I’m afraid that you will be
Quite lonely when we leave you for vacation.”

“NO” formed on her lips
As she planted hands on hips
Then she looked to see her mother really meant it
So she took a deep breath in
(And grinned a little grin)
Saying, “I will do my best to prevent it.”

Such an eloquent little girl!
Complete with little curl
Right in the middle of her forehead
She gave up shouting “NO”
And with sweet face quite aglow
She shouted words that were even more horrid

This is my submission for the W3 Challenge this week. Poet of the Week Violet (Congrats, Violet!) gave me the kind of challenge I love — a story poem. However, I did not follow all her guidelines. Here’s what she said:

Tell a story in verse—true or imagined, rooted in memory or invention. Let it unfold in a place you know well or one you’ve only dreamed of.

You can let the voice guiding the poem speak in a dialect—regional, ancestral, invented, or intimate. Let that voice shape the rhythm, grammar, and soul of the piece. Whether it’s Appalachian twang, Mandarin-inflected English, Nigerian Pidgin, or your grandmother’s Russian-accented Hebrew, the dialect is not a flourish—it is the storyteller.

While this use of dialect is optional, it’s highly recommended. Give us a poem that walks and talks in its own shoes.

I DID tell a story. However, I didn’t use a dialect. Trust me, this is good — my original attempt was to write a poem in Pig Latin.

A to Z Blogging Challenge · family

P is for Patriotism

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True patriots are no longer champions of Democracy, Communism, or anything like that but champions of the Human Race.

Frederick Buechner, Whistling in the Dark

My father was a man who was a champion of the Human Race. He dedicated his life caring for people.

I’m using my recuperation to sort through some of the stuff at my parents’ house. Today I came across a small collection of books that are Class Reunion Reports from Harvard Medical School. My father graduated from there in 1955.

In each reunion report, the class members submit updates on their careers and their personal lives. I’ve been leafing through each one to find what my father said.

In 1980, he said this:

We look back on the last 25 years with great satisfaction and pride in our family and their accomplishments, and with gratitude for having had an opportunity to be contributing members of our communities, for having the acquaintance of so many wonderful people, and for having witnessed such exciting change in our nation and our world. I still believe in the Red Sox, the United States of America, and the inherent goodness of our fellow man.

My father lived those words.

He died with the last Red Sox game of 2019 on the television in his bedroom. It was fitting.

He loved this country. He served in the US Army. Every year he would faithfully watch our local Memorial Day parade down Main Street, and stand at attention for the 21-gun salute. It was a huge honor when he was asked to Marshall the local 4th of July parade. He proudly walked (no convertible for him!) the whole parade route in his dress uniform.

And, he truly believed in the inherent goodness of our fellow man — although our current president gave my father a challenge there.

One of my funniest Emergency Room moments with my father was in 2017 or 2018. The staff was trying to assess his cognitive status by asking the usual questions:

  • Do you know where you are? (“Bassett Hospital in Cooperstown, NY”)
  • Do you know what day of the week it is? (I can’t remember whether his response was correct or not. That’s not really a fair question for older people who have less of schedule to mark their days.)
  • Do you know who the president of the United States is? (“I refuse to say that awful man’s name.”)

I think that makes him a patriot and a champion of the Human Race.

And cognitively aware.


fiction

The Drink Museum

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The series of signs:

[IT’S MUCH BETTER]

[THAN YOU THINK]

[DO NOT MISS]

[THE DRINK museum]

“What’s that about?” Johnny asked his mother. They were driving on a small highway in Kansas to visit his uncle.

“I don’t know,” Mom said. “Uncle Fred never mentioned it.”

[WINK*WINK*WINK]

[YOU’RE ON THE BRINK]

[of THE DRINK museum]

The signs were brightly colored, pink-orange-green, obnoxious.

[WHATEVER YOU DO]

[DON’T BLINK!]

[YOU MIGHT MISS]

[THE DRINK museum]

“We have to stop,” Johnny said. “It’s probably cool.”

Mom sighed and pulled over.

Signs guided them to a sketchy-looking parking lot outside a fenced-in enclosure. A ticket booth, painted those same loud colors, stood in the middle of the wooden wall facing them.

“You might be s’prised,” the toothless old ticket-taker said, pointing to path they were to follow.

[MILK]

First, they came to plywood cow with teats that could be squeezed. Johnny went to try.

“Don’t touch it!” Mom shrieked. “Germs,” she explained.

The cow was followed by a goat, sheep, yak, camel, horse, and moose.

“Do people really drink moose milk, Mom?”

She shrugged.

[VEGETABLES and FRUITS]

The path led them past a large plywood carrot, beet, pumpkin, cucumber, tomato, oranges, grapefruit, apples (and an old apple press), and grapes (and a vat for stomping to make wine).

[OTHER]

The hops were labeled.

Corn, barley, and rye followed.

“Corn juice?” asked Johnny, but Mom saw the still around the bend.

[FREE SAMPLES]

“Goody!” said Johnny. “I want to try them all!”

This is my (weak) contribution to this week’s Unicorn Challenge. Still working on getting my mojo back.

The rules for the challenge are easy — no more than 250 words and use the photo for a prompt.