So hardy
This darn garden weed party
They send out underground shoots
Roots
I’m rooted
Genetics aren’t muted
Love for this ancestral throng
Strong
This is a deibide baise fri toin, an Irish poetic form
- The poem and/or stanzas within the poem are quatrains (or 4-line stanzas).
- Rhyme scheme for each stanza is a simple aabb pattern.
- Lines one and two rhyme on a two-syllable word; lines three and four rhyme on a monosyllabic word.
- Line one has three syllables, line two has seven, line three has seven, and line four has one.
- 3-7-7-1
I’ve had a crazy week with little energy for writing. This will have to do for the W3 prompt which was to use the garden for inspiration and go below the surface.
A lovely poem Sally.
Sally, I love how you compare strong garden roots to your family roots, showing that the deepest things in life help us stay strong.
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I love this form and the poem! It doesn’t feel slap-dash at all!
hi, Sally❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Benji, is live until next Monday (July 6):
Much love,
David
Beautiful poetry ❤️❤️👏