I close my eyes to the darkness
It’s easier that way to not see
The suffocating night
With its lack of light
Where even shadows can’t be
It’s a deafening deaf abyss
Open your eyes; find the light
Sticking my head in the sand
I can neither see nor hear
Nor taste nor smell
Nor live my life
’tis its own hell
Sans peace, sans strife
This existence of living in fear —
I must be willing to stand
Open your eyes; find the light
I rise and lift my head high
I open my eyes to the dark
A slim shaft of light
A glimmer, yet bright
Catches my eye like a spark —
Engagement is how I defy
Open your eyes; find the light
This is my submission to this week’s W3 challenge.
Kerfe challenged us to write a bop poem titled “Instructions on Not Giving Up.“
A bop poem has three stanzas and a refrain that repeats after each stanza. It tells a story or explores a problem, a bit like a mini-drama.
- First stanza – 6 lines
Present a problem or situation. - Refrain
A single line that repeats after each stanza. Think of it as the poem’s chorus. - Second stanza – 8 lines
Expand on or explore the problem in more depth. - Refrain
Repeat the same line. - Third stanza – 6 lines
Show a solution or a failed attempt to solve the problem. - Refrain
Repeat it one last time.
The other night I listened to an artist describing her process. She said that painting has taught her to look for the light. I need to remember to do that.
I like the way you describe how easy it is to turn away and then make the conscious decision to turn toward. (K)
Beautifully done. Like the refrain you’ve used
Great take on the prompt 🙌
What a beautiful delivery!
Great rhyming scheme to use for this write. 👏
It is so easy to neglect the light with the way the world is today, but I like the strength of choosing to engage that your poem ends with.
That closing line, “Engagement is how I defy,” really resonates with me, Sally. The whole piece feels like a gradual awakening. 🌅
~David
hi, Sally❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Sarah Whiley, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2025/10/22/w3-prompt-182-weave-written-weekly/
Much love,
David