poetry

Introvert

Sally

In the shadow of the forest
In the shadow of this wood
In the shadow of one maple
In the shadow there I stood
In the shadow am I hiding?
In the shadow I’m abiding
In the shadow, in the shadow – all is good

The W3 prompt for this week is as follows:

  • THEME: Explore the contrast between light and darkness;
    • Use metaphor to reveal hidden truths or surprising insights;
  • FORM: Each line must begin with the phrase “In the shadow of…”
  • LENGTH: Exactly 7 lines;
  • TONE/IMAGERY: Create vivid imagery that evokes a sense of mystery or revelation;
    • Aim for a narrative arc that transitions or oscillates between themes of obscurity and clarity.

I got the 7-line part right, so I should get partial credit for that — but no metaphors or vivid imagery. Sorry. Just the thoughts of an introvert who has had a rough week.

Can I go hide somewhere now? In the shadow?

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12 thoughts on “Introvert”

  3. Sally, I love how you captured the quiet peace of being in the shadow. It feels really personal and introspective. You may not have used metaphors, but you still created a beautiful, calming reflection. The shadow works perfectly here!

    Much love,
    David

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  8. This is lovely, Sally, it feels like a song. 💞💞💞 I hope your week gets better, that you can rest in your shadow, then recharge in the sunshine. 💞

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  9. No, you don’t hide, I think you shine beautifully in the perfect simplicity of this you say so much – I really felt this was like a secret you whispered… and “all is good” – made me smile 💞

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