
“Come ON,” insisted Mrs. McMeen. “No time to dilly-dally on your daily constitutional.”
“Why?” he asked. He had stopped to peek through the gate at the children.
She stopped short. “Why what?” she snapped.
Geordie had a bunch of whys swirling in his head. Why can’t they stop a moment? Why can’t he watch the girls? Why is Mrs. McMeen so mean?
When they got back to the house, Geordie ran to find Granma. Mrs. McMeen called after him, but he pretended not to hear. Granma was where he thought she’d be, in the parlor, knitting.
The light sifting through the curtains, the quiet click of the knitting needles, and the sight of his Granma made him smile.
Granma looked up and her whole face smiled at him.
“The girls were jump-roping today,” he said, “but Mrs. McMeen wouldn’t let me stop again!”
A cloud passed over Granma’s face. She set down her knitting and extended her arms toward the boy. He went to her and was engulfed.
“Which house?” she asked.
He told her.
“Two girls?” she asked.
He nodded.
She went to the desk and pulled a photo of a family out of the drawer.
“Are these the girls?” she asked.
His brow furrowed. “Yes. That’s Ma and Da,” he said, pointing to the parents. “You’ve shown me them.”
“And that’s you,” she said, pointing to the baby.
“But…” he puzzled.
“They all died in the fire, Geordie,” she said. “That’s when you came to live with us.”
This is my contribution to the Unicorn Challenge. The challenge is easy: write no more than 250 words and use the photo as a prompt.
Oh my, cool twist, Sally! I hope he can retain his Sight! π
Ooh. I love this!π₯°
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Oh Sally, how beautifully sad.
And spooky.
With vivid images and cool wordplay.
I love it.
Thanks Jenne
A very touching ghost story ππ
Thanks, Willow!
Oh. Psychic? Just sees ghosts? Or is this residual trauma?? A fascinating story Sally!
That’s the problem with this challenge! 250 words raises more questions than gives answers! I’m glad you enjoyed it
Mrs McMeen is a sweetheart.
Cool tale, Sally
Sheβs definitely your type.
Well worth the wait: Not late! Spooky take, gently presented with so much final impact at the reveal. Wonderful!