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Thoughts on Travel

I have just
One wild life —
So should I
Avoid strife?

When roads di-
Verge, should I
Choose safe? or,
Wonder why

I paused at
All — and plunge
Headlong in
A great lunge

Of faith. I
Think I’d like
To rise, go,
Walk, swim, bike

Encounter
Life in all
Its pain and
Joy. Enthrall

In being
Alive! Yes!
I needn’t
Second-guess

Brains in head
Feet in shoes
This must be
Life I choose


Tiny nods to a few poets who inspire me.

I was beyond honored to have been chosen as Poet of the Week by Kerfe who blogs at MethodTwoMadness for The Skeptic’s Kadish W3 prompt.

What does that even mean?

  1. She liked my poem “A Dance for the Lonely
  2. I had to come up with the next prompt (I chose an unpronounceable Irish form – Cethramtu rannaigechta moire – which requires 4 line stanzas with 2nd and 4th lines rhyming, and strict 3 syllable lines)
  3. I have to choose the next Poet of the Week

Well, I’m traveling this week, so I chose a theme of travel.

Easy, right?

Wrong!

I’ve scrapped so many poems this week! The pressure is on! Between walks in beautiful British Columbia, I’ve tried to write and the struggle is real.

But I started a Lenten devotional on Ash Wednesday based on the poems of Mary Oliver so I tried to let her inspire me a little.

12 thoughts on “Thoughts on Travel

  1. Sally, this is a lovely, bold exploration of life’s choices and the embrace of adventure and authenticity. I don’t know how many you scrapped, but this one is excellent!


    ~David

    1. Ah, David — I think my first was the best because I let it write itself — but it was WAAAAY too personal. I couldn’t post it. Then there were two other meh-attempts, but this one seemed okay to me. Thank you for your kind words — always.

  2. Sally I just posted in Mr. Linky FYI. I love this one – so often it is difficult to break away from the routine and get out in the world to experience it!! I love the way you highlight that struggle and the choice to get up and go!!! ❤

  3. Sally I so agree with your philosophy here, we have to take all life throws at us, we have no choice, but the good stuff we are ready for and appreciate so much more. I hope you kept the ones you scrapped for this time for yourself as I find sometimes they work their way into other prompts, there for a reason ….. Loved your poem and the intro to this form…
    💞Suzanne

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