I seen what they are
I ain’t been where they been
But I ain’t gonna lie —
When they look at my skin
And see all my tats
I seen judgment begin —
But, God, they don’ know
Diddly zip nothin’
‘Cause they’re full o’ themselves
And full o’ shit too
They can’t lend a hand
To help me or you
They just bitch about this
And bitch about that
I ain’t got no patience
For those miserable prats
The W3 prompt for this week:
Write a contemporary poem inspired by Robert Burns on one of his three themes: love, nature, and the human condition. Also, try to include some local dialect.
This is based on my many conversations with one of my co-workers. He is one of the most genuine people I know — comfortable with himself, willing to help anyone in need, judged frequently by those who don’t know him.
Sad, but true — I don’t hear his dialect anymore and had to pay attention to it yesterday as he leaned on the counter and told me about his dogs (one of his loves) and the current bourbons he is considering (another of his loves). He and I share a frustration with the way people complain and complain and complain, but do nothing to make anything better.
Hot Dogs and Marmalade 
I really enjoyed this!! It’s so real! Hits the truth head on. Well done!
Thanks, Barbara!
Sally, I just read your blog post, and I wanted to say it’s truly powerful. The poem captures a genuine perspective, and your portrayal of your co-worker’s authenticity is both moving and relatable. It’s a reminder to appreciate those who are real and willing to make a difference instead of just complaining. Great job!
Much love,
David
Thanks, David!
Sally, hi! 👋🏻
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by the delightful Aboli Mane, is now live!
Enjoy!
Much love 💖
David
Some people are just like that…do diddly zip nothin’ ….love that line.
Thanks! Honestly, I could hear my co-worker’s voice while I wrote this. While I’ve never heard him say exactly that, I wouldn’t be surprised if some day I do. 🙂
Sally this is a wonderful depiction of what seems like an casual yet profound conversation!! Bravo!
No beating around the bush … your co-worker. It’s not offensive just colorful. It’s probably what many of us want to say …. but it wouldn’t sound the same.
I think that’s why he is so refreshing to talk to!
agreed
Loved it Sally… Your friend has the best mindset..let Dem keep talking, diddly zip nothin, while he keeps on living. People who keep it authentic, are my kina people..👏👏
Love that phrase “diddly zip nothin’”! Sounds like a fun co-worker.
I love this – it’s a piece of art 🙌
Aw — thank you!!
AMEN to this, Sally! 💞
I relate to the judgment because of outward appearance. I also empathize with the annoyance at people who seem to complain all the time.🙃