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What IS it?

“Hahaha – TAG! You’re it!” Johnny turned and ran.

Charlie wheeled to chase his friend but almost fell over the metal piece lying on the plaza.

“Whoa!!” he cried. “Johnny look at this!”

He picked up the long cylindrical piece he had stumbled over. It was heavy, rounded and finished at one end, rough at the other. The rough end had clearly fit into something.

“What is it?” asked Johnny. “It looks like an antique joystick.”

“You are absolutely daft,” Charlie said. “First, it’s too big. Second, it’s too heavy. Third, it’s metal and everyone knows that joysticks are made of plastic and have buttons on them.”

“I said it was an antique,” Johnny replied defensively.

“I think it’s a belaying pin,” Charlie said. “I saw them when my dad took us to a ship museum.”

Johnny looked puzzled. “I’ve never heard of a belaying pin.”

“When pirates were trying to climb on board a ship, these things were in the railing and the sailors could pull them out to whack the pirates on the head,” Charlie said, attempting to demonstrate. The proportions were wrong and the piece too heavy. “Maybe not,” he said.

Charlie rarely admitted that he might be wrong. Johnny beamed.

They both threw out ideas for what it might be.

“Part of a fancy fence?”

“Something that fell off an old piece of furniture?”

Just then, a man approached them. “You found it!” he said.

He took the piece from the boys and walked quickly away.


This is my submission for the Unicorn Challenge. It’s a simple challenge: No more than 250 words and use the photo as a prompt.

I have no idea what that picture shows. Can someone tell me what that is?

14 thoughts on “What IS it?

  1. Ha, mystery prolonged – ‘Who is that ( not) masked man?’
    I love your stories that have conversations between boys, Sally, I always see and hear them.
    And thanks for the new word – I’d never heard of a ‘belaying pin’.

    1. I showed that picture to multiple people to ask them what it was. Nobody seemed to know, but one man thought possibly it was a belaying pin. I had to look up what that even was.

  2. Hey!! Hey! come back here… ain’t right to walk away without providing an authoritative description of the thing! ain’t right!

    lol fun story

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