From there to here and here to there
From that to this and this to where
From seed on wind to in the ground
New growth, slow growth — changes abound
In winter earth and trees are bare
From there to here and here to there
Snow and ice yield to subtle Spring
Or not-so-subtle — hear it sing?!
As birds return and leaves burst out
Flowers bloom. They whisper. They shout
From there to here and here to there
Summer comes with flamboyent flair
Flaunting sunshine on sparkling lakes
Eagles, herons, doves, ducks and drakes
Some migrate south on cool fall air
From there to here and here to there
This is my response to the W3 Challenge this week — to write a quatern on the theme of transformation.
What’s a quatern, you ask? Well, it has four quatrains (four-line verses). It’s syllabic: each line has eight syllables. It may rhyme, but rhyming is not required. It has a refrain. The refrain of a quatern repeats the 1st line of stanza one (S1) as the 2nd line of S2, the 3rd line of S3, and the 4th line of S4.
I feel my Dr. Seuss influence is showing in this one.
A lovely poem Sally
Beautiful poem, with fun flow. I thought of Dr. Seuss too.
The seasons coming and going, the light almost trippy rhythm, sounds so easy and joyful, an acceptance and positivity in the constant change, love the use of the birds – I especially liked your line ‘or not-so-subtle – hear it sing?’ I really enjoyed your quatern
💞Suzanne
Thanks, Suzanne!
Tag, your it Sally…. congratulations I chose you as the next POW, the upbeat flow really touched me this week. Thank you
💞Suzanne
Oh my goodness — I am so flattered!! Thank you!!
You are welcome 💞
Nice rhythm. Really upbeat!
I love everything about this, the repetition, the seasons… I was there with you!
Utterly delightful from start to finish (which happen to be the same line 😉 )
~David
indeed a masterpiece, Sally. Well deserved. Totally!
I enjoyed this so much. Thanks for writing it. Delightful indeed.
Thanks so much for your kind words! I’m glad you enjoyed the poem.
Very. Immensely 👏🏽
I love your poem, Sally, how you gently cycle through the seasons.
This is unutterably beautiful. A brilliant quatern. ❤️
Lovely dance through the seasons, Sally! 💞💞💞