I think you need to read yesterday’s Blather to understand what’s going on here. In short, this strange, strangely-formatted poem, is because I could hear it, almost like a song with three distinct voices. This is in response to the W3 prompt which called for using a line or two from Leonard Cohen’s Anthem.
Gosh, I apologize. If you were to meet me in person, you might think I’m normal. However, after reading this, you won’t think that at all.
Okie-dokie — Here goes:
Must be a hell of a scary crack
That’s how the light gets in
That’s how the light gets in
A hell of a scary crack
That’s how the light gets in
That’s how the light gets in
I was sittin’ with my coffee
In the hotel breakfast room
When a homeless guy walked past me
He was headin’ for the food, for the food
Must be a hell of a scary crack
That’s how the light gets in
That’s how the light gets in
Mmm… it smelled so delicious
He closed his eyes just to drink the smell in
But his hands were a’trembling greatly
Like a leaf at the end of a willowy limb
Must be a hell of a scary crack
That’s how the light gets in
That’s how the light gets in
Hunger moves a man to do a scary thing
He’d been thrown out before, thrown out before
Still he braved it all again
When he saw that crack in the door, crack in the door
Must be a hell of a scary crack
That’s how the light gets in
That’s how the light gets in
Lights and smells both beckon
But not to those who have everything
If we aren’t hungry, we miss them
We miss it all, yes, we miss it all.
Must be a hell of a scary crack
That’s how the light gets in
That’s how the light gets in
Excellent 💜💜
Yesterday’s blather and this poem were fantastic!! Heartfelt!
I was thinking of the light getting through the crack as I walked in the woods yesterday. And of those hungry people out there. Thank you
Thank you, Barbara!
Sally ~ this is utterly amazing. So well observed.
Much love,
David
As always, you’re so kind. Some day, though, I want to hear you say, “This is rubbish! How could you write such tripe?” 🙂
Sally ~
I just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by the lovely Elizabeth of ‘Tea and Paper’, is now live!
Enjoy ❤
~David
Such a very moving poem Sally
You’re very kind to say so.
Of course my friend
Wow! This reads like song lyrics – and I can hear it sung!!
Thank you! I literally could hear the song in my head and just tried to write it.
Very different.